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Writing Samples
Band 1

You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatsfied with your score.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am
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 your English course.My name is Suhrob.
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 week You took
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 from us.After that,You told us"The exam result will outcome on Friday".Today is Friday
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, we took our exam results.At the moment I am glancing at them.And I found some mistakes which you did them during checking my
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 them, there are almost three hundred words
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 but you wrote two
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hundred
 fifty words total. I truly use the words like
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native English.And there were many mistakes by you.I do not want to write about all of them
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this
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 letter. Cause of my low grade I want you to control
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.I hope after
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 grade is better than the result which I am writing Sincerely, Suhrob.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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