One of your neighbour's children has accidentally broken the front windows of your car . You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should Introduce yourself Explain how it happened And what they should do

Ďear sir or madam I am your neighbour
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Lobar Suyunova inhabits close to your home . I am writing to
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complaint
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you rely on your children's problems . I and you are very friendly joneses .
Definitely
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I have resided for a long time there
that is
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by
then
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there have not been any complications relevant to each other as well as our own things .undoubtedly
i
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believe that we always respect each other .
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one day my
car
was staying
my
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yard
that
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I
have
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purchased a new red
car
from an auto
car
recently.it was very marvellous .
Then
your children visited my home in order to view it. I permitted them.
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they broke
windows
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of my new
car
by accident . They were gazing at that condition .
As a
result
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I was shocked
although
now I am sure they have been regretting
from
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their error till. So I wish that you did not shout at your children as well as you should not reprove them .undoubtedly they have given their conclusion from that
badly
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position so I am not annoying them nowadays .
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if you compensate my new vehicle . I will accept your
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being cheerful . Thank you for your attention Yours sincerely Lobar
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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