A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment . Which do you think the company should choose ?use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
A colossal corporation is contributing some various nations of the world ought to enjoy them .
role of
money
as charity either to aid the artwork or to defend the
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apply
nature
. In my view defending nature
is the most dominant thing for society because it has a lot of effects to
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on
community
. I will put my thoughts into words in forthcoming paragraphs .
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the community
money
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a donation
donation
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donations
artworks
. Because progressing art is the most cardinal aspect for Fix the agreement mistake
artwork
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. especially our national music instruments or music Add an article
the public
express
our culture and Correct pronoun usage
that express
traditional
.They have been part of our history For a long time. Replace the word
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the song
a song
song
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songs
for instance
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contains different marvellous sounds as well as folk music . So they should be come on worldwide by variousCorrect pronoun usage
apply
assotsattion
. Correct your spelling
association
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,
However
majority of people as well as I claim that we must stand up for Add a comma
,However
nature
because our environment are
being polluted by mankind. It means people always produce various trashesChange the verb form
is
into
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in
nature
. It contains different plastic bags , plastic products as well as syntethic
materials . It resultsCorrect your spelling
synthetic
to
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in
pollution
of our world . Correct article usage
the pollution
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result
it has been Add a comma
,result
global
complication among all countries . Correct article usage
a global
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as all landfills are full of garbages
. Our earth has been in danger Correct subject-verb agreement
garbage
connect
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of
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for
probl
.ems relevant to environmental pollution . So if we restore plastic rubbish , contaminating ecology will reduce by that strategy . So we have to set up companies that Correct your spelling
problems
they
rebuild Correct pronoun usage
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trashes
. Change the verb form
trash
Eventually
they will require Add a comma
,Eventually
colossal
amount of Add an article
a colossal
money
. So to
my mind all companies that Change preposition
in
they
are going to give some Correct pronoun usage
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money
as charity ,they
can divorce some Correct pronoun usage
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money
to save environment
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the environment
instead
of supporting art .
To conclude : all firms must divorce money
from their fund in order to secure our nature
that they are going to separating
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separate
money
as Add an article
a contribution
contribution
for anything . I feel that the most alternative Fix the agreement mistake
contributions
desicion
is separating Correct your spelling
decision
money
to
our environment from their budget because Change preposition
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the
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the public
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