You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter: explain the situation describe the kind of accommodation you would like provide the dates you will need it

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Dear Mr Samson, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to inquire about any possible short-term rental you have for a month, as I will be travelling to San Francisco for project work. I work in a foam safety surfacing company, and we are partnering with Disney for the redevelopment of their Pixar Palace hotel. The person who was going to supervise the installation got injured, so I was called in immediately for replacement and because of that, I need to travel to San Francisco urgently. I am a single person

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and looking for a short-term lease of one month. One bedroom apartment is preferable, but I am willing to share a two-bed apartment with a roommate as well

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appreciate it if the stay is near Disney’s hotel, which will shorten my commute. I will arrive by Jan 1st , So the lease needs to start from Jan 1st and the move-out date will be Jan 30th by evening. I really appreciate your patience with

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moment request and will look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Vimal Thakkar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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197 words

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