You are being sent on a one month work assignment in San Francisco, California. You need a place to stay while you are there. Write a letter to the Maury Samson Real Estate Agency. In your letter: explain the situation describe the kind of accommodation you would like provide the dates you will need it Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr Samson, You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mr Samson, I

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you are doing

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. I am writing

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letter to inquire about any possible short-term rental you have for a month, as I will be travelling to San Francisco for

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project work. I work in a foam safety surfacing

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company

, and we are

parterning

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partnering

with Disney for

redevelopment

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the redevelopment

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of their Pixar Palace hotel. The person who was going to supervise the installation got injured, so I was called in immediately for replacement and because of that, I need to travel to San Francisco urgently. I am a single person

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and looking for a short-term lease of one month. One bedroom apartment is preferable, but I am willing to share a

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apartment with a roommate as well

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until it has

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for both of us. I would

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appreciate

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the stay is near

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Disney’s hotel, which will shorten my commute. I will arrive by Jan 1st , So the lease needs to start from Jan 1st and the

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date will be Jan 30th by evening. I really appreciate your patience with

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moment request

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and will look forward to

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from you. Yours faithfully, Vimal Thakkar