Our personalities are predefined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that
people
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,
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cannot change, I strongly believe that
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of character. On
one
hand, there is a belief about personality
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influenced by our genes and
it
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cannot be altered as
one
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and he/she understands
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how
people
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to changing their personalities.
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side,
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people’s
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results
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of DNA codes.
On the other hand
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how
parents
educate them because when a person
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, he is like a white paper. His parent's pencils define the how
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will be at the end of the drawing.
For example
, a great many experts in
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ten years is
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decisive factor in
people
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.
Moreover
, in
this
case, Meltem Çelik, which is
one
of the famous pedagogues in Turkey, resembles
parents
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and children to
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.
Therefore
,
parents
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trait
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. In conclusion, whether personality is an inborn gift, or it can be affected by outside remains
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that individuals
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who
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young ages (0-10) can be shaped by their
parents
.
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