Our personalities are predefined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?
It is argued that
people
's personalities are reclarified thanks to their DNA codes before they are born, meanwhile, neither effect which comes from outside can influence or alter this
thing. Although
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people
's behaviour cannot change, I strongly believe that parents
are the key factor in the development of character.
On one
hand, there is a belief about personality is influenced by our genes and cannot be altered as one
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people
are close to changing their personalities. For instance
, in bilateral relations both sides strive to alter to another
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other
however
, no one
gets the results that one
wants. Thus
, people
think characters
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the characters
people
are the results of DNA codes.
On the other hand
, the most significant element for determining the individuals’ personalities is how parents
educate them because when a person is born, he is like a white paper. His parent's pencils define the
how the paper will be at the end of the drawing. Correct article usage
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For example
, a great many experts in this
field highlight that education in the first
ten years is a more decisive factor in people
's traits. Moreover
, in this
case, Meltem Çelik, which is one
of the famous pedagogues in Turkey, resembles parents
to sculptors and children to sculpture
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Therefore
, parents
have a big role in the improvement of a child's traits.
In conclusion, whether personality is an inborn gift, or it can be affected by outside remains a controversial issue. I completely agree those individuals who are young ages (0-10) can be shaped by their parents
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