Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • Explain the reasons for the noise • Apologise • Describe what action you will take

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Dear

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Red, I have received your letter of complaint regarding the noise

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my flat.

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, I am a student of the London Finishing Arts.

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month, there will be commencement rites for the graduating students. And since I am a member of the school choir, we will be performing at the said commencement rites. Unfortunately, the location where we used to practice is being repaired at the moment, so I volunteered to have our practices in my flat.

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, the noises that have been disturbing you may come from the musical instruments. I did not realise and it was very inconsiderate of me that our practice time is already late in the evening, and some of you might have been asleep already. I am truly sorry for

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issue, I will immediately look for an alternative place to do our rehearsals.

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you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Emma Stone

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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