Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • Explain the reasons for the noise • Apologise • Describe what action you will take

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Dear

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Red, I have received your letter of complaint regarding the noise

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my flat.

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, I am a student of the London Finishing Arts.

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month, there will be commencement rites for the graduating students. And since I am a member of the school choir, we will be performing at the said commencement rites. Unfortunately, the location where we used to practice is being repaired at the moment, so I volunteered to have our practices in my flat.

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, the noises that have been disturbing you may come from the musical instruments. I did not realise and it was very inconsiderate of me that our practice time is already late in the evening, and some of you might have been asleep already. I am truly sorry for

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issue, I will immediately look for an alternative place to do our rehearsals.

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you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Emma Stone

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

156 words

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • Explain the reasons for the noise • Apologise • Describe what action you will take

Some people believe that it is responsibility of individual to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information because they have more influence than other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?