You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with regard to the seminar offered by your organization that will be held in Asia. I am a student of Business administration at

Hamsville

Correct your spelling

Hansville

University in London. I am in my final year and soon will be graduating

this

coming Spring. As one of the requirements for me to be able to graduate, I must attend a work-related workshop regarding business ethics. I came across your ad on our campus bulletin board, and I am interested to join. I would like to ask for more detailed information

such

as the dates, program, accommodation and the cost of the seminar. How long does the convention

last

? Is the accommodation included in the cost of the seminar? Anyways, do you have a website that I can look into? Or perhaps, I can come by your office to

further

discuss the details. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Emma Stone

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