You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with regard to the seminar offered by your organization that will be held in Asia. I am a student of Business administration at

Hamsville

Correct your spelling

Hansville

University in London. I am in my final year and soon will be graduating

this

coming Spring. As one of the requirements for me to be able to graduate, I must attend a work-related workshop regarding business ethics. I came across your ad on our campus bulletin board, and I am interested to join. I would like to ask for more detailed information

such

as the dates, program, accommodation and the cost of the seminar. How long does the convention

last

? Is the accommodation included in the cost of the seminar? Anyways, do you have a website that I can look into? Or perhaps, I can come by your office to

further

discuss the details. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Emma Stone

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Clear and correct grammar

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water they want, but others believe government should control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource.

Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be death of grammar and spelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students should pay their full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+