Nations should spend more money on skills and vocational training for practical work, rather than on university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Before

this

, People often focused on higher education but it is only theory and rarely

practice

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. In my opinion , I suppose that countries should invest more financially

on

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skills and occupation coaching for practical work. To some

extent

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I agree with

this

statement and I have some reasons below.

First

of all, mostly, university students have to borrow money from the government to study

education

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for education

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.

This

is a lot of burden and pressure on them. While training school is cheaper, faster and easier looking for jobs.

For instance

, people who only through about 6 or 8 months to learn about nail medicare,

then

they can apply for a job immediately.

Moreover

, Nowadays, nations in the world lack blue-collar workers

such

as chefs, workers at farms and staff at hotels.

Furthermore

, those people have an early career without debt, which helps them be happier and helps them save money to set up their families. But everything has pros and cons.Owning a graduate degree has many benefits

such

as big companies often

choose

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applicants who are completely done at university . Without a university

degree

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there might rarely be chances of promotion in the future and they might receive a lower rate of salary

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the same position than those who had graduated. In conclusion, I strongly believe that states in the world should provide more money for vocational teaching to improve and develop it.