Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. *Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.*

There are 2 both views about the environmental problem. One thing that the violent environmental problem is the cause of the loss of some
species
of plants and animals, the other one believes that it is a rather unimportant problem because there are the main other things that can be effective to the
world
. According to the situation that was mentioned, to be perfectly honest, I think that there are more necessary conflicts with the environment than the loss of some
species
.
For instance
, there is a food chain in the
world
to help us to be in equilibrium in the stable life of every
species
.
Therefore
,
that is
so usual to be lossed some
species
over some time. and there are not any disasters. We should pay the attention to other violent effects on the
world
,
such
as the emission from many vehicles or global warming from deforestation or something like that.
On the other hand
, sometimes, the effects that people could be making are worst and more violent. That
also
can be ruining some
species
that are necessary to the
world
;
in other words
, lacking them can be the worst effect on the food chain and environment. Actually, no one would like to see things that happened, so we should keep the good atmosphere and bring it back to good as used to be. In conclusion, the effect of lacking some
species
could be a tragic circumstance in the
world
. Whereas, sometimes
this
is just a part of genetics and the natural environment, there are more problems that are massive and worth enough to solve it.
However
, everyone should not abandon and ignore any problems in the
world
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystems
  • irreplaceability
  • endangered species
  • habitat depletion
  • climate change
  • global warming
  • deforestation
  • environmental degradation
  • sustainability
  • conservation efforts
  • pollution
  • ecological balance
  • resource scarcity
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • impact assessment
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