.” Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.

Investing in methods to prevent sickness, certainly, will help society to reduce costs. I completely agree with

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statement, there are different ways to prevent illness,

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, have a better

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is the best way to anticipate a disease that people could develop in their

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not only helps to reduce cost

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, will avoid suffering to discover an illness very late.

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, it is important to enhance preventive actions. Doing yearly medical exams will give information about your health. If the results are not expected, a treatment is token.

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, nowadays, cancer is a common disease, that causes suffering and the treatment is costly.

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,

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is the most important action. Patients will save money due to the fast treatment and the illness would not be so lethal if it is discovered in its early stages.

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, is it important to mention that

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is not only an individual issue,

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a society that should act

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is government should make plans to enhance avoidance and encourage healthy

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, undoubtedly, the consequences will be a better condition of

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for the people and reducing the cost of having an expensive medical process.

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, even if some diseases have cures, they will be very expensive. To illustrate, diabetes can be developed

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genetics or because of bad habits. The

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could have been avoided,

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, saving money and complications, even, losing the capacity to

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. To conclude,

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not only enhance saving money, but

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a better

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and

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suffering. It is important to be informed and

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