Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Yes, global warming is
really
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serious
problems
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nowdays
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now days
, we can feel the
diference
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difference
each year, and in
this
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I'
ll
tell about what I think about global warming and give some
advices
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advice
.
Firstly
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ll
recomend
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recommend
to
people
not to litter the world
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because it's one of the main factors why
it
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is global warming in the world. After it, I'
ll
recomend
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recommend
not
to cut
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woods
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because
,
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trees
make us cold weather and air to
breath
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. In my opinion
government
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the government
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should make measures like fines for maybe
cuting
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cutting
trees
without reason or littering in any
places
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. Global warming is a real problem
of
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nation
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the nation
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, in Uzbekistan when
i
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was 5 years old,
weather
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may reach
to
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30 degrees but now it raised to 43 degrees, It's
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crazzy
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crazy
differense
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difference
. And
also
one of
main
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factors is to waste
water
for nothing. I bath can take
people
250
liters
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of
water
, you may say that it's not true or something like
this
, but if you'
ll
count it's really so.It
crazzy
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crazy
. We can drink 5 litters a day, but to wash
ourselver
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ourselves
we use 250 litters, and I didn't count how much
people
can use
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big
waterpools
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water pools
, maybe 2000
liters
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litres
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, it's 400 days of drinking
water
, and we
also
should think about Africa's children, they don't have
water
.
Water
makes us cold weather more than
trees
. We
sould
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should
could
not use
water
for nothing. So
people
should look
themselves
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, they should not
to
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litter, and not cut
trees
and not
to
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waste
water
because they'
ll
feel
themselves
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well in
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summers
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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