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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you are selling describe the furniture suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

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Dear Jeet, I am writing to let you know that I am selling some
furniture
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 my house. I thought you would be interested to buy it because once you told me you need that. As you know that recently, I got
promotion
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 from my company
thus
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 they shift me
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to at
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at
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a
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new
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 place but they
also
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 give me
staff
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 house which would be fully furnished.
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 I will not need to bring appliances with me so, I want to clear some
furniture
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in
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 less price. Let me explain the type of
furniture
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 which I would to sell. It is
45 inch
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 television, microwave, dining table and double door fridge which is brand new. If you want to get these things
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 you can come on Saturday, 24 December for having a look
of
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furniture
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the furniture
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. After
that
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 I will put it on clearance. Thank you for your consideration. Best regards, Simran

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