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You would like to invite your friend from abroad to a public event in your country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the public event explain why you think he/she would like the event write how you can help your friend with accommodation

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Dear Katie, Hope you are doing well. It was great talking to you over the call
last
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 week. I am writing
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 letter to invite you
for
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 a public event in India where we do nothing but,
dance
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. I cannot forget the days when we used to
hangout
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hang out
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 during our graduate studies. Remember those
dance
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 nights at
skybar
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Skylar
sky bar
? You used to
dance
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 all night, and won most of the prizes. No one stood a chance against you! That gave me an idea. How about you coming over here for two weeks from Sep 20-Oct 2
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 year? We have
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 public event called Navaratri, which happens every year for 10 days, where people
dance
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 for hours in circles. We do different steps in circles to pay respect to
godess
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goddess
 Ambe, and the
dance
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 is called Garba. Since you like dancing, I feel you will enjoy
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 event very much and I am confident that you will hardly take any time to learn those steps. I can definitely help you in teaching the
dance
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 form after my work hours, or I can
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 take off from work for
few
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 days and spend time with you. Regarding
accomodation
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accommodation
, the hotels around my house are not at all expensive.
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, I know you like to cook your own food, so I can arrange an apartment for you in my building.
Infact
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In fact
, the apartment
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 to me is empty and the cost per night is only $30. I will talk to the landlord and get that unit for you. I can't wait to hear from you! Best Regards, Vimal Thakkar.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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