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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapaers or books because they will be to read everything they want online without paying. to what do you extent agree or disagree with this statment ?

#future #nobody #newspapaers #books #statment
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Many people will not buy printed
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 as newspapers and
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 since they will have access to all the
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, which will be available online and for free. I mostly agree that
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 will happen in the future.
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 reading from printed papers has benefits that develop many skills for individuals, reading
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 could be much easier and savvier over time. Developed technology devices and the internet, Which are essential in our life of
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 time, rich to
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 much easier than before.
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, people do not need to pay for written
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 because many reasons,
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 of all, they take up a lot of space in the house, offices, and schools.
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, now all
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 that the person wanted, can be riched in seconds, so no need to carry all that printed paper.
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, at all stages of a student in an educational institution, A lot of
books
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 take them from house to school and visa versa. For that, the student starts to hate
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, but the internet has allowed having their book in their pocket, which can read them at any time they go. Another reason is the cost of printing, electronic
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 are very cheap, and mostly they have no cost.we can see any book when we like,which
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 better than looking for the book that we need maybe
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 be expensive. In conclusion, electronic resources of
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 better in all ways of review. low cost, get
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 in fast ways,
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 do not cause pollution, easy to carry in everywhere.
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