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Discuss the advantages and the disdavantages of study abroad

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It is considered by many
people
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 that the demand for foreign
education
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 has increased and doubled over a decade.
This
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 trend has more benefits than demerits.
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, I believe that for the holistic development of a student foreign
education
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 is a must. There are several advantages for
students
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 who are learning abroad.
To begin
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 with, They have a better understanding of various cultures and traditions.
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, when a student enters a college, he acquainted himself with multiple
people
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 from different locations which helps him to understand their cultural values.
Secondly
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, these
students
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 are living far from their families,
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 at the early stage of their life, they became independent.
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, as
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 class of
people
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 have a great
education
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 and vast experience both at the national and international level they are prone to get more success in their future endeavours.
On the other hand
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,
this
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 trend has a few disadvantages. Depression is one of the major issues of
students
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 who had left their homes and settled in an absolutely new world.
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, migration must be difficult for
students
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 as the local language
is
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 new and a huge difference in the culture causes depression as
students
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 can not speak up about their feelings.
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, earning has to be done for them, they are not dependent on their family which could hamper their
education
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 and eventually lose focus. In conclusion , I strongly believe that foreign
education
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 is a must for the child as they will come across ample challenges which will make them better
people
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 and they can live
successful
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a successful
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 life.
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