It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is argued that childcare should be done by a female as they are better than a male. I strongly take issue with

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proposal as

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are evenly given care by both

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and house chores should be shared no matter what their

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.

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, it is true that some countries and/or people believe that

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should be at home to look after

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because kindness, softness, and generosity are the nature of

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. These beliefs normally originate from religious ideology, myths and folklore and influence males’ dominant attitude,

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, imposing pressure and responsibilities of childrearing on

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.

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,

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, those beliefs or social acceptance are wrong and males should have the same characteristics as

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more or less toward

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as human beings.

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,

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have a right to be brought up by

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with being loved, even though a female as a mother has more time to be attached to a baby at the beginning after childbirth. A male as a father

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has a role to take part in childbearing

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as changing diapers, giving baths, and formula milk.

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experience considerably develops relationships between children and

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,

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has a positive impact on the whole family.

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, another important issue to take into account is that

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have been becoming more independent and have achieved women’s empowerment in modern society compared to thousands of years ago.

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, acquiring high levels of education, careers and improving quality of life. These positive trends have affected companies to have more opportunities to meet efficient female employees and

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promote the productivity of businesses.

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, these benefits are not only productivities but

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facilitate a good and diverse working environment for all staff members.

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, people who have outdated stereotypes, and have prejudice in

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roles, should be given some measures of amending their understandings and behaviours toward

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and males should consider

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' jobs at home as their jobs rather than thinking about whether suitable jobs or not

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. In conclusion, I disagree with the statement, because regardless of

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, I believe that both

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should be involved in childrearing, as it gives significant advantages to

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, the family and eventually society.

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to

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, the male-dominated beliefs toward domestic work for a female need to be addressed to achieve

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equality.