It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is argued that childcare should be done by a female as they are better than a male. I strongly take issue with

this

proposal as

kids

are evenly given care by both

parents

and house chores should be shared no matter what their

gender

.

Firstly

, it is true that some countries and/or people believe that

females

should be at home to look after

kids

because kindness, softness, and generosity are the nature of

females

. These beliefs normally originate from religious ideology, myths and folklore and influence males’ dominant attitude,

as a result

, imposing pressure and responsibilities of childrearing on

females

.

However

,

not to mention

, those beliefs or social acceptance are wrong and males should have the same characteristics as

females

more or less toward

kids

as human beings.

Furthermore

,

kids

have a right to be brought up by

parents

with being loved, even though a female as a mother has more time to be attached to a baby at the beginning after childbirth. A male as a father

also

has a role to take part in childbearing

such

as changing diapers, giving baths, and formula milk.

This

experience considerably develops relationships between children and

parents

as a result

,

this

has a positive impact on the whole family.

Secondly

, another important issue to take into account is that

females

have been becoming more independent and have achieved women’s empowerment in modern society compared to thousands of years ago.

For instance

, acquiring high levels of education, careers and improving quality of life. These positive trends have affected companies to have more opportunities to meet efficient female employees and

consequently

promote the productivity of businesses.

Moreover

, these benefits are not only productivities but

also

facilitate a good and diverse working environment for all staff members.

Therefore

, people who have outdated stereotypes, and have prejudice in

gender

roles, should be given some measures of amending their understandings and behaviours toward

females

and males should consider

females

' jobs at home as their jobs rather than thinking about whether suitable jobs or not

gender

. In conclusion, I disagree with the statement, because regardless of

gender

, I believe that both

parents

should be involved in childrearing, as it gives significant advantages to

kids

, the family and eventually society.

In addition

to

this

, the male-dominated beliefs toward domestic work for a female need to be addressed to achieve

gender

equality.