You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of how long you will be away • suggest how you will make up for the lost time

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to request some

time

off work from the regular office duties of the company. Basically, the main reason for asking the same is for attending the marriage of my cousin who

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in a line of our generation. My whole family is getting together in a single place after a very long

time

, and it will be a perfect moment to spend some

time

with family members. As you are aware that I am living alone here in a company-provided house,

this

would be a perfect moment to be together with the family members. I would like to take a

time

off for a period week, starting from Monday.

Initially

, I thought of 2 weeks but due to the shortage of leaves in my account, I have opted for 1 week off. In order to compensate for

this

whole 1-week of work, I will spend extra hours daily and try to meet the project timelines. Alternatively, it would be great if you can provide any other solution

besides

working late hours. Yours sincerely, Vishal Saxena

Submitted by vsaxena.vsaxena on Sun Dec 11 2022

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7 paragraphs

183 words

8.00

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Clear and correct grammar

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