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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many
people
 assume that
experts
,
such
 as engineers and general physicians should work in the
country
 where they studied. While some
people
 including me believe that they can work freely in other
countries
 if they tend.
People
 who have a qualification should dwell everywhere they want even though, another
country
 paid for their training and education. In
this
 article, I will discuss both points of view and give my own perspective. On the one hand, every
country
 should provide an educational environment for their residents and it is a basic necessity for each society. Some
experts
 could not able to move abroad when they were young and after their qualifications, they can change their locations.
Also
,
people
 who are living in developing
countries
 maybe do not have great facilities and they can migrate to wherever they want.
For instance
, in Iran, we do not have animal models for our trials. Some developed
countries
 give better incomes and salaries to their
experts
 and professionals because of that
experts
 can leave their own
country
.
On the other hand
, the
country
 where
experts
 did their training provided them with some factors,
For instance
, they gave them discounts for public transport like buses and underground trains and
also
, the authorities had given them free accommodation while they were studying. But, from my perspective, every
country
 should do the statements which I wrote below because of their duties. By way of conclusion,
firstly
, every government should provide facilities for their dwellers and equip every university with cutting-edge machines.
Secondly
, despite some free tickets and accommodations, everybody should be free to choose the
countries
 where they want to live.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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