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Every country in the world has its road rules, but many drivers don’t obey them. Why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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Many
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 disobey the
traffic
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rules
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 which are legislated by the government. The main cause of
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 problem as well as a few solutions will be discussed in
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 essay. Since there is no public awareness of
traffic
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rules
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 and their advantages and disadvantages,
drivers
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 tend to disrespect them. Most
drivers
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 nowadays are hurried up where ever they go, join a meeting or an appointment, and prefer to disobey the road
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 to save more time.
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, there are no heavy fines for
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 who do not follow the
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. The restricted speed signboards have shown but people enjoy to over the limited speed,
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 is at the root of accident causes but there is not any hard punishment for them. There are a number of steps that need to be taken to solve
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 problem.
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 of all, people should be fully aware of
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rules
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 and
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 advantages. Driving schools, television programs and virtual platforms can play an important role in
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 case and governments should invest in these tools to educate people.
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, there should be a law according to which
drivers
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 with a high number of non-observances of road
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 should be banned from driving for a while and pay heavy fines. To conclude, everyone should respect
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the
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rules
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 to mitigate the number of accidents. Both the government and individuals are responsible for
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