Some people think governments should make university education free, but others think students should pay fees by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether
university
tuition should be free or not has been a discussion topic for a long time.
Although
some may support the former opinion, my view is that
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education should be fully funded by the government.
Firstly
, in case if
students
pay the
university
fee by themselves, it can easily reach around 500 million yen in total, which is a huge commitment so people tend to think about their future seriously before applying to
universities
. The
University
of Tokyo reported that those
students
who paid the full cost by themselves have less chance of changing the faculty in the middle of the course because they research well before applying to
universities
.
Furthermore
, the nation can allocate the budget for other important factors
such
as the nation's cybersecurity and decarbonization. Meanwhile, in case the government own the tuition fee, it can produce equal opportunities to apply for
universities
and faculties regardless of their financial status.
This
is a great solution because there are many potentially skilled people without enough money.
Moreover
, we can expect that it has a great impact on society.
For instance
, in North Europe, the education cost for
University
students
is generally free, and many talented people from the low-income stage are now studying at
universities
and impacting the economy.
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, it brings economic growth which leads to GDP improvement. In conclusion, owning the tuition by admission is effective for
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the government fund it, it opens the door to low-income
students
and improves their economy. In my view, I agree with the latter view.
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