Academic Task 2 Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some argue that
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learn
proffesionals
like doctors and Correct your spelling
professionals
engineers
in one Use synonyms
country
, they suppose to apply their knowledge in the same Use synonyms
country
where they begin. Others said that it is something that they should be free to choose. I believe that working Use synonyms
at
the same Change preposition
in
country
where they got their education is needed.
On one hand, Use synonyms
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making
people
build their Use synonyms
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career
at the same place as they learn may Fix the agreement mistake
careers
seems
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seem
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like forcing
forcing
someone's Change the verb form
to force
right
. Fix the agreement mistake
rights
However
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this
can lead a Linking Words
country
to a lack of Use synonyms
professionals
in some fields. When there are no specific boundaries about work law, Use synonyms
people
tend to choose the best place where they can get the easiest ways to achieve their Use synonyms
career
goals. Use synonyms
For example
, if Japan Linking Words
consider
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considers
as
the best Change preposition
apply
country
in advanced technologies, all Use synonyms
engineers
will prefer to work in Japan. Use synonyms
Professionals
in those countries where the Use synonyms
engineers
left may have only Use synonyms
few
qualified Change the article
a few
engineers
. Use synonyms
Thus
, the development of technologies in other countries will Linking Words
far
from Japan.
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be far
On the other hand
, working Linking Words
at
the same state where Change preposition
in
professionals
got their Use synonyms
degree
can create big Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
impacts
on each Fix the agreement mistake
impact
country
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the development in every field can experience the same rise. All Linking Words
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
major
will have enough Fix the agreement mistake
majors
people
to look for. Use synonyms
Secondly
, it is the proper feedback to give good service to the environment where we grow. Linking Words
For instance
, when someone Linking Words
choose
to study at Universitas Indonesia and successfully achieve their Change the verb form
chooses
career
, it is a nice thing to share how was the experience with students who just starting their Use synonyms
first
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career
step. It Use synonyms
also
will motivate them to give good things to the place where they begin.
In conclusion, I think that working Linking Words
at
the same Change preposition
in
country
where Use synonyms
professionals
did their training is needed to aim Use synonyms
fair
development in each field. Change preposition
for fair
Moreover
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for
at least give positive feedback where they choose to grow, even Change preposition
to
only
a small thing to remember.Correct word choice
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