Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: -say how you feel about his/her performance -give details of your music related activities -explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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to let you know I am your big fan and I got a chance to attend one of your concerts in Lahore and your songs brought back my teenage memories. I consider you a king of Punjabi rap. You are an amazing artist with a large fan following. Here I would like to mention that I am a guitarist by profession.

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, I play in various local music parties and gatherings which are my source of income. I have been an instrumentalist since I graduated,

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, music is not just my career but my passion. I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance to play guitar at your

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concert. It will be a dream come true, as it will not only boost my confidence but I will get a little limelight and publicity. I assure you my play would not disappoint you. I am eagerly looking forward to hearing from your team. Yours faithfully, Leo

anniezafar3Sun Dec 11 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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