Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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this

digital era, some people argue that playing online

games

on the internet can contain violence

that is

harmful to

this

society while others think it does not have any negative effect.

This

essay will discuss both views and I will illustrate my opinion in conclusion. On the one hand, the community states that spending time playing

games

specifically that includes killing characters with guns or knives put remarkable effects on the mind of players which is actually true. A person always wants to win the

game

even if he needs to shoot each and every character involved in the

game

For example

, Pubg won the title of the most famous

game

this

world that promotes violence as well, in

this

game

player is required to shoot every anti-party individual, and

this

game

seems to change the lifestyle of youngsters, and they start believing in violence. Their point of view states that if they have weapons

then

they have power in hand and they can achieve anything they dream of.

On the other hand

, it has been believed by people that these

games

are just a form of entertainment. If a person has knowledge that what is good and what is bad for him

then

even if he plays violent

games

, it will surely not put any negative impact on his lifestyle. To exemplify, recent research was occurred in the U.S. to notice any changes in the personal life of ten regular users, only two out of ten promote gun culture in their real lives, the rest just enjoy playing online and have no interest to implement the same in day to day lives. In conclusion, I would say that rather than limiting violent

games

to entertainment purposes only, devoting so much time to these

games

will definitely change the mindset of youngsters as they start believing that no one can put control over them if they have weapons in their hands.

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

The picture shows coffee bean production. Summarise the information and give comparison when necessary.

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How could this be changed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.