Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The State should grant
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however
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health
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. And on top of that, we, as citizens, pay Correct the article-noun agreement
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a private institution
taxes
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as well as
security and education.
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access
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, public services should be available to the lower classes. Linking Words
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as Argentina, where 50% of the population is poor, the government must grant Linking Words
access
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taxes
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taxes
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therefore
, the population should be able to notice the results of every tax paid.
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taxes
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