You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear Sam Simer, Hope everyone around you is safe and healthy. Actually, I am planning a 9-day trip to Mumbai on 25th December

this

year. As I have heard about the new year celebration around the city is amazing.

Also

, a friend of mine is celebrating his birthday on 29th as well in the town. I know it's short notice, but could I stay at your place for the time I am in Mumbai? I understand that you guys are planning a holiday at the same time, so I can take care of the house. It will be okay even if you are not comfortable with the arrangement. I understand you will not be open to accepting cash from me for the stay, but I insist that you please consider asking for some help required for the house or business during the time you are away. Hope to see you soon in Mumbai. Yours sincerely, Hogg Sean

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8 paragraphs

157 words

8.50

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Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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anticipate
accommodation
arrive/depart
duration
itinerary
gracious hospitality
household
inconvenience
lodging
reimburse
temporary residence
travel arrangements
visit
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