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You and classmates have been trying to find a book for a while and the book is out of stock. Write a letter to the publisher. Write a letter and in your letter Say why you need the book Mention what the problem is And ask the publisher to republish the book or provide you with copies of the book.

Dear sir I am writing
this
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 letter
you
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to you
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 to say my necessities for an ancient
book
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 which
is
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apply
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about medicine. I and my classmates attend school every day and our biology teacher mandated us to acquire
a
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apply
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knowledge of cure for injuries
that
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is
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are
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 used only to remedy with natural herbs. So the
book
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 is really vital for us.
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Moreover
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,Moreover
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 we have a big problem. The issue is that we did not find it in many libraries. Even though the libraries are huge and
primative
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primitive
the
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apply
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book
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 is absent
in
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from
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it
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them
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. But the
tome
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time
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is exist
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is existed
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 on
internet
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the internet
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. So that we asked
for
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apply
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you to publish the novel for us. If we read it in
electronic
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the electronic
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 way our eyes may be hurt destructively. I believe that you are
palatable
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a palatable
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 person we know. I hope you are capable to establish the
book
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. Thank you for your attention. Yours Faithfully. Roza Bahodirova.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic enrichment
  • out of stock
  • republish
  • widespread interest
  • impacted
  • availability
  • alternative formats
  • pre-order
  • group purchase
  • urgent request
  • ebook
  • PDF version
  • new edition
  • publisher
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