These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, with
increasing
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population owning their personal computers and telephones, working at
home
becomes accessible. There are indeed both pros and cons
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doing
this
. But personally, I believe that working at
home
does more good to people and
this
essay will discuss the reasons. Let us begin by looking at the advantages of working at
home
. One of the main positives is enhancing employees’ working ability. What I mean by
this
is that working at
home
forces
staffs
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to learn how to use the computer and some
softwares
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software
.
For instance
, employees who work at
home
are asked to skillfully use Word, PowerPoint, Excel, Tencent Meeting and so on, which makes them master more skills.
Secondly
, working at
home
saves
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time
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transportation and increases
efficiency
. We are able to see
this
when we live far away from the working place, for working at
home
saves our
time
of transportation two hours or more per day and the saved
time
enables us to finish more work and increase
efficiency
. Turning to the other side of the argument, working at
home
may reduce the communication between
staffs
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. To be more precise, online chatting is not supposed to replace face-to-face communication.
For example
, I have higher study
efficiency
when I communicate with teachers face to face
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to online communication.
This
negative effect can be optimized by opening cameras when communicating online. Another issue is that employers have difficulty
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supervising employees’ work.
In other words
,
staffs
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may loaf on the job if the boss is not around, which reduces the working
efficiency
of the company.
This
issue is supposed to be solved by setting reasonable working tasks and examining regularly. Taking everything into consideration, working at
home
has more advantages than
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disadvantage
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disadvantages
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for enhancing employees’ working ability and saving
the
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time
of
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transportation and increasing
efficiency
.
Although
it has some disadvantages, it seems to me that the benefits prevail
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any negatives.
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