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Humans are producing an increasing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on earth.

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Nowadays many people are utilizing an increasing pile of rubbish
everyday
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 and the universe is obtaining full of the
landfills
 we use to get rid of our trash. In my opinion, recycling some plastic things avoid not to be more
landfills
. In the paragraphs to come ,we will see
this
 matter and I shall put my solutions. In recent years more items are manufactured from some plastic or metal substances.
Moreover
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 people can apply in once them . some humans throw them in paths and nature. Nobody would dispute the fact that some individuals are really slothful to put them in special bins .And some rubbish can not be recycled in any way you slice it. On the other, hand
in
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 my opinion, there are many solutions to solve them .
Firstly
 everyone should not cast trash in any and
also
 we recycle them in many factories only fit from them.
Then
 we should utilize them until they would be expired. If we had applied in some garbages for our land as
a
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nourishment
such
 as some food's branch. There would not be so many
landfills
. In
conclusion
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 many people use
some
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unfit plastic waste and
they
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 lead to some
landfills
. If we did not cast them our nature will be in a palatable situation
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