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You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my satisfaction with your
hotel
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services
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 during my accommodation from September 25 to September 30, which was an unforgettable experience. Thank you for your
services
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 and kindness, which made my trip more enjoyable and unforgettable. What captivated me most about the
hotel
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 was its stunning view overlooking the breathtaking scenery of the city. Another aspect of the
hotel
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 was the
services
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 your staff provided. They were very welcoming and kind, particularly Ali , who really helped me become informed of the city's must-visit attractions
while
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 offering me information on local people's cultures and traditions. To make up for your kindness, I wrote a comment on book.com, where most visitors book their accommodation, and I explained the unique features of your
hotel
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. I
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 gave 5 stars for your
services
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 and staff. Thank you again for your
services
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 and kindness. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Hadavi Bavil

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task response
Answer all three parts well. Add one or two more clear details, such as the room, food, or place, to make your thanks feel more real.
task response
Use the correct website name. Write “Booking.com”, not “book.com”. Also, say “I left a review” instead of “I wrote a comment” for a more natural letter.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end. Use simple link words such as “Also”, “For example”, and “Finally” to join ideas more smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Keep each paragraph on one main point: thanks, good parts of the stay, and the online review. This will make the letter easier to read.
coherence and cohesion
Avoid saying “services and kindness” many times. Use other simple words, such as “help”, “care”, and “good service”.
task response
You thank the manager and staff, give clear good points about the hotel, and say that you gave the hotel a five-star review online.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is easy to follow. It has a polite greeting, clear paragraphs, and a suitable closing.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expressing gratitude
  • exceptional service
  • hospitality
  • cleanliness
  • quality of food
  • attentiveness
  • memorable experiences
  • organized tours
  • unique facilities
  • positive review
  • tourist website
  • motivated
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