Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no nee to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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With the development of technology ,more and more people choose to watch movies by using their

phones

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tablets

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,they think there is no need that watches

films

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in the

cinema

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.But another part of people considers that watching

films

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in the

movie

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theater

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theatre

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is fully enjoyed .I think that watching

films

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should be in the

movie

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theater

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theatre

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Firstly

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，it is true that watching

films

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on our

phones

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tablets

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sometimes can save money or save time.

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,we do not need to go to the

cinema

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,we can watch

films

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anytime at our home.But watching

films

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in the

cinema

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can have a more comfortable experience

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because the

cinema

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has a big screen and comfortable seats,we can

also

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buy some popcorn in the

cinema

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before the

movie

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begins.

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，we can watch new movies in the

cinema

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when it

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first shown

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was first shown

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, but we can not watch the new

movie

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on our

phones

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On the other hand

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,we can watch a 3D

movie

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in the

cinema

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and we can not watch it on our

phones

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tablets

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,it will have

a different effects

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different effects

a different effect

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in different ways.

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,we watch some 3D movies,

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and we

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can have a visual impact when

watch

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watching

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in the

cinema

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,but we can not see that effect when using

phones

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to watch them. In conclusion, watching

films

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in the

cinema

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have

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different effects and experience and feeling from watching

films

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by using

phones

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tablets

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Watch

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Watching

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films

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in the

cinema

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should not be replaced by using

phones

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to watch

films

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. So

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deem that watch there is

also

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a need to go to the

cinema

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to watch

films

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

260 words

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