Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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that
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dependent
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human
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and every field.
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has some positive effects on us,
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, due to
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some people "face problems. In upcoming
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I will give proper explanations and describe
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positve
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positive
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and negative effects on people. To start with,
machines
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are seen everywhere humans are
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defined
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,
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world has need
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fast equipment that do work within a
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and these electronic
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fulfil
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. It saves people’s time and money because one device is equal to hundreds of
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. Apart from
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demand
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salary and other facilities as well.
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,
machines
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work in every season and weather.
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, workers take
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in
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the rainy
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season and
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but
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are work
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very well in both cases.
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, electronic
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have some negative effects on
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because it
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environment
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. but
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pollute
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river bodies and other natural resources.
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all electronic
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equipment
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are very
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expensive
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countries
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them.
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, most of
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the labours
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in companies are
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illiterate
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previous
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knowledge to use these
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to
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they face problems and
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they lost their lives.
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, using
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in Companies
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the main reason
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unemployment or
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development lead
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to poverty
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among young workers. In conclusion, electronic
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equipment
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replace by hand workforce
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further
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lead
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unemployment
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to unemployment
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in
country
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and
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their citizen poor. on the other side replacing
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the manual
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workforce
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machines
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save
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amount of time and money. Do not overlook the other side
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this
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prompt but the disadvantages are far more than
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the advantages
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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