Machines are taking over more and more jobs previously done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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that

machines

are very

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in

this

thechnical

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technical

era people are

depened

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dependent

on these

devices

. Electronic Gadgets

replacing

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human

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each

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and every field.

This

has some positive effects on us,

however

, due to

this

some people "face problems. In upcoming

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positve

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positive

posted

and negative effects on people. To start with,

machines

are seen everywhere humans are

defened

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defined

on them.

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,

this

fast growing

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world has need

of

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fast equipment that do work within a

second

and these electronic

devices

fulfil

public's

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need

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. It saves people’s time and money because one device is equal to hundreds of

employer

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. Apart from

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, electronic Equipment has no

further

demand

of

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salary and other facilities as well.

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,

machines

are

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work in every season and weather.

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, workers take

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in

rainy

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season and

Winters

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but

machines

are work

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very well in both cases.

On the other hand

, electronic

devices

have some negative effects on

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because it

is not only pollute

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environment

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. but

also

it

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pollute

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river bodies and other natural resources.

Furthermore

all electronic

equipments

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are very

expencive

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expensive

, so some

development

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countries

are not buy

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them.

Moreover

, most of

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in companies are

illitrate

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illiterate

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previous

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knowledge to use these

devices

due

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to

this

they face problems and

some time

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they lost their lives.

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in Companies

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the main reason

of

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unemployment or

this

development lead

poverty

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among young workers. In conclusion, electronic

equipments

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equipment

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replace by hand workforce

that

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further

lead

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unemployment

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in

country

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and

make

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their citizen poor. on the other side replacing

manual

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workforce

into

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machines

save

huge

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amount of time and money. Do not overlook the other side

this

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prompt but the disadvantages are far more than

advantages

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.