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Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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In most modernized
schools
,
discipline
 is getting
worse
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the worse
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 issue. A few individuals argued that teachers ought to take
the
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responsibility
of
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for
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 controlling the
students
.  But, another group of people argued that
parents
 should take care
this
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of this
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 problem. In my opinion,
parents
 have to take
the
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responsibility
of
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for
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 children’s
control
. For most, worse
control
 of
students
 should take
cared
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 by tutors. Most
of
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apply
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the students
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students
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students'
student's
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 bad behaviour
cause
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causes
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 some problems related to
discipline
, and people think that
this
 kind
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of issues
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issues
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issue
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 must
prevented
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be prevented
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 by instructors because of their good leadership ability.
For example
, in most
of
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developed
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 cities,
pupils
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pupils'
pupil's
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 worse
control
 is
a
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the
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responsibility
 of tutors and it
showing
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the
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good result by reducing the amount of negative conduct of
students
.
Thus
, people think that tutors should help to diminish the getting worse
discipline
 in
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modern
schools
.
However
, I believe that bad
control
 of
students
 not only in
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modern
schools
 but
also
 in ordinary
schools
 ought to be
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of
father
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 and mother. For
this
 reason, whether children have
worse
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discipline
 or not, it
is really depends
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 on
parents
 giving orders. And they will show
himself
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or
herself
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themselves
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 bad or good behaviour, after even many years will
passed
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.
For instance
, my close friend can be
role
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a role
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 model person for other
students
 with
himself
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his
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 good conduct.
Therefore
, children should
bring-up
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 with  
parents
 giving strict orders in order to mitigate the worse
discipline
 of pupils. To conclude, both
parents
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parent's
parents'
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 and
instructors
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instructors'
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responsibility
 is
same
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the same
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 to
decease
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decrease
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 the
discipline
 issue where in
the
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modern
schools
. But, I feel  that
parents
’
responsibility
 can be much higher in order to better the
students
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student's
students'
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 conduct.
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