Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In most modernized

schools

,

discipline

is getting

worse

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issue. A few individuals argued that teachers ought to take

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responsibility

of

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for

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controlling the

students

.  But, another group of people argued that

parents

should take care

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problem. In my opinion,

parents

have to take

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responsibility

of

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for

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children’s

control

. For most, worse

control

of

students

should take

cared

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by tutors. Most

of

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apply

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the students

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students

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students'

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bad behaviour

cause

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causes

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some problems related to

discipline

, and people think that

this

kind

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of issues

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issues

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must

prevented

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by instructors because of their good leadership ability.

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of

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developed

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cities,

pupils

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pupils'

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worse

control

is

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responsibility

of tutors and it

showing

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good result by reducing the amount of negative conduct of

students

.

Thus

, people think that tutors should help to diminish the getting worse

discipline

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modern

schools

.

However

, I believe that bad

control

of

students

not only in

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modern

schools

but

also

in ordinary

schools

ought to be

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of

father

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and mother. For

this

reason, whether children have

worse

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discipline

or not, it

is really depends

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on

parents

giving orders. And they will show

himself

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or

herself

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themselves

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bad or good behaviour, after even many years will

passed

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.

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, my close friend can be

role

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model person for other

students

with

himself

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his

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good conduct.

Therefore

, children should

bring-up

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with  

parents

giving strict orders in order to mitigate the worse

discipline

of pupils. To conclude, both

parents

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parent's

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and

instructors

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instructors'

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responsibility

is

same

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the same

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to

decease

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the

discipline

issue where in

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modern

schools

. But, I feel  that

parents

’

responsibility

can be much higher in order to better the

students

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student's

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conduct.