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Schools should not make students memorize anything, because nowadays people can look everything up on the Internet”

#schools #students #people #internet”
We always hear that the new generation hates memorizing, especially since we can use technology, it is easy to look up on the internet.
Therefore
schools
 should not make
students
 memorize anything. I believe that we need to keep pace with technology development and use it in the real life.
To begin
 with, Memorising something in the old way
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is very boring,
students
 hate memorising for many reasons.
For instance
, there are many subjects that
students
 take in school
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it does not benefit them in the future. The student does not have to memorize information that can easily find
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 the internet.
Instead
,
schools
 need to change some of the subjects that have a lot of memorisation and add more particular ones.
Moreover
,
schools
 need to focus on the other skills that the student needs to have for his future.
Such
 as presentation, teamwork, communication, and critical thinking skills. To sum up, I argued in
this
 essay why
schools
 need to stop making the
students
 memorize anything. I agree with the statement because I believe it is important to keep pace with technology.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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