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Some scientists thinks that there are intelligent life forms on ohter planets and messafes should be sent to contact them. Other scientists beleive that this is a bad idea and could be dangerous. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

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Certain science experts believe in the existence of talented creatures on various
planets
 and they opine to communicate with them.
Conversely
, others strongly oppose
this
 idea as they find it harmful.
However
, in my opinion, it is worth exploring the universe and several other
life
forms
 that exist. To commence with, the primary purpose behind professionals suggesting to converse with the aliens is to enhance our knowledge. The more we would know about our universe the better.
Furthermore
, the information about the
life
-supporting environment on other
planets
 may expand the scope of habitat on different
planets
.
Moreover
, it would serve as an opportunity to explore and know about the
life
forms
 that exist.
For example
, the research centres are currently working on the matter of finding out if human existence is supported on Mars.
Hence
, contact with the
life
forms
 on other
planets
 would eventually increase our reach and intelligence. On the flip side, doing so may require highly developed technology which essentially becomes expensive.
Also
, it needs immensely skilled scientists to work on it.
In addition
, the researchers pursuing the task may put their
life
 at stake since they are rare chances of coming back from
space
.
Additionally
,
space
 rockets involve high chances of explosion and unidentified dysfunctionality.
As a result
, the individual may get trapped in some circumstantial loophole in the
space
.
For instance
, famous scientist Kalpana Chawla went on
space
 travel and while coming back her rocket underwent some unknown technical trouble due to which all her companions along with Kalpana were dead on the spot.
Thus
, it is really unsafe to carry out
such
 interactions with
life
forms
 outside the earth. To conclude,
although
 it is important for the young generation to elevate their knowledge regarding
space
 and the universe, it is much more necessary to safeguard ourselves.
Therefore
, it is recommended to let the creatures of other
planets
 live on their own without bothering them.
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