You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: where you went what you saw there how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Darshit, I hope you had fun in Orlando. I saw your photos on Instagram, and Disney’s adventure park looks fun! Anyways, I am writing

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letter to you regarding my recent visit to the Museum of Miniature Arts in New York. I was travelling to Canada and had a long layover at JFK airport, and I remember you suggested

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particular museum if I ever go there. The miniature museum was just 20 minutes away, so I took a cab and went over there. I was really surprised to see numerous tiny items

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one place, and it was

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to see the mini version of The Taj Mahal, which was precisely accurate. Can you believe that? I

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saw several tiny animals,

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used to live in the Amazon about 5000 years ago. There was a miniature version of the Mercedes Formula 1 car, which was interesting. I am really grateful that you suggested me

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, I would’ve never visited.

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there was nothing educational, It was still entertaining. I can’t wait to see you, my friend! Best Regards, Vimal Thakkar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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188 words

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