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in some counties an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for goverments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The number of communities who are suffering from cancer and diabetes, which is called the silence pandemic, is rapidly increasing.There are a lot of factories that threaten our health
nevertheless
 some population believe that junk foodstuff is a main problem and governments should have a policy since it becomes a global disease.in my view the government have the right policy about it and having a healthy lifestyle will grow up. There are three main things that politics can do. Part of the public thinks imposing a higher tax on fast food will reduce its usage of it.
besides
, it might pressure the public financially. So will just lead people into poverty and social stress. One of the main reasons why the population eat unhealthily is the high cost of a nutritious meal. So the
first
 thing
that is
 can be done is to decrease the tax on healthy products
such
 as vegetables and dairy products. That Additional, most society eat junk food because of their busy work schedules. Another thing that ministry can do is becoming work time more flexible so that people can make their meals at home and deny fast food
furthermore
 it benefits a lot
such
 as having time for family and improving personal skills. individual’s habits and knowledge about a good lifestyle.
Lastly
, healthy eating habits need to be taught in school in order to have a healthier future. Governments’ right decisions can make a huge difference but a combination of government right policy and an individual person’s desire to live healthily can significantly fall down the number of death cases caused by disease. We need to teach our kids about a balanced diet and being active in order to achieve greater results.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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