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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause stress, and how can we reduce it?

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These days ,
people
 usually have a
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 stress in their own lives because they are often worried about their job , family and health.
However
, when they can distract themselves from their bad thoughts by practising the activities they like, they seem to be very happy and satisfied. To elaborate, nowadays, since a large number of
people
 want to have a higher life quality, they might work for many hours in their workplace due to the fact that they have a great interest in getting the best position and a better salary in the company they are part of in a few years . The women who do their profession in a hospital or another place, in case they have one or more children ,
admittedy
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admittedly
admitted
, they
also
 need to spend time looking after and playing with their kids .
Besides
this
, those who suffer from a serious illness that can be ,
for example
,
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cancer or a chronic disease are probably exhausted
about
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 the continuous therapies their doctors suggest
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do.
However
 , many
people
also
 try to distract themselves from their worries by doing funny activities. Many of them usually practice any sport they like in the sports centres that are
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 too far from
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 houses they live in. Indeed, my young sister usually goes swimming in a pool two or three days a week especially in the evening after she finishes working and comes back home whereas her boyfriend frequently has a long walk in the mountains with her or his friends who have
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 same passion. In conclusion , I personally think that if
people
 really listened to their true needs ,
the
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 would learn to find the best way they can distract themselves from the stressful events they daily run into.
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