some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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experiences from various sources in their
country
and overseas. While some people think that the global exchange program for students has more drawbacks, some teachers believe that its benefits are dominant. I personally believe that studying abroad for a while would bring about more positives that I will outline in my essay. Regarding the benefits,
firstly
, the pupils can enhance their
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proficiency which will be necessary for pursuing higher education or getting a preferable job
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era.
In addition
, communicating with foreigners leads
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teenagers
more fluent in speaking
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helping their involvement in international conferences during
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Furthermore
, the opportunity to meet new friends and teachers from various backgrounds can improve logical thinking to solve
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problem in their academics.
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manage their interest
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from the
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grade of high school, so they will learn
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in detail comprehensively which is good for their focus.
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, having long distance with
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member and familiar classmate build the confidence and independence of the students. In daily life,
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teenager will be responsible for themselves, specifically to make a decision when faced
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problem.
Conversely
, we should not ignore some negatives that
this
program may bring about.
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, experiencing
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journey for the
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emotional disturbance due to culture shock and homesickness.
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native
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greeting to every person whom they meet, but it can be
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weird activity in
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country
.
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pupil will have
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study period when they come back to their nation because of the different curriculum. To pass the grade, some examinations should be done which will be difficult to finish
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when have not mastered the theory. So, the student should take more
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to learn the previous grade. In conclusion, while
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, I would argue the benefits that
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program
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may lead to are more significant which include improving language
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, logical thinking, and confidence.
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