Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is debated that
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who do the agenda in a
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learn more crucial skills, but someone who finishes the activity by himself gets less. I personally agree with
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statement to some extent, and I will explain the reasons in
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essay. On the one hand, it is true that some crucial skills are received when
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work in a team
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as communication and leadership which are needed in social life.
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usually consists of a leader, manager, member, and so on that has different responsibilities, so someone who becomes a chief gains experience
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how to divide the job based on his member’s ability and how to deliver an order politely.
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, meeting various talented
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teaches each other new talents which are not mastered. In a
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, teammates can share their expertise alternately, so each member trains many kinds of talents.
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, a singer in a
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learns to play
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from his partner who is more expert.
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, we should not ignore that there is an activity which is
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preferable to do solitary,
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as a practice that needs greater focus. Calculating monthly costs is better to finish by ourselves to get the accurate result
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because
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can interrupt frequently. In summary, it seems to me that
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work is
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because it offers many positives
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as learning good interaction and new skills from the expert. Even though, sometimes,
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should end their business personally on
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occasion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication skills
  • problem-solving
  • collaboration
  • conflict resolution
  • leadership
  • accountability
  • social connections
  • networks
  • adaptability
  • empathy
  • diverse personalities
  • real-world environments
  • team dynamics
  • group cohesion
  • interpersonal skills
  • delegation
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