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In many cities there is little control on the design and the construction of new homes and office buildings; people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation ?

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The case of constructing new homes and office
buildings
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 with little control by the authority in some countries not
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 brings a lot of advantages but
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 has some drawbacks. On the one hand, it is admitted that little control over the design and the
construction
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 of homes and
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 benefits people in some specific aspects. Without any limitation in design and
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, designers or owners of them can freely carry on their new ideas which may not follow the normal way. From that point not only they can fulfil their passion but
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 their constructions become unique
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.
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, homes are places for people to shelter for a long time and
buildings
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 are places for them to get more aspirations.
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, if they can be designed as the owner's interests and built with their preferred material, people are able to be satisfied all of the time they stay in these places.
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, there are some advantages of
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 tendency that should be considered. The consistency of a country may be lost when it comes to free designs and constructions, so there is not a good appreciation of the overall view of the counties at the beginning.
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, it is significantly dangerous to residents if the government does not interfere with the stage of checking designs and
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 of a house and office
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.
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 step is extremely important to ensure that the design and materials used for
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 are safe for the owner and their neighbours as well. In conclusion,
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 there are some convincing benefits of the discussed tendency in the
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 industry, it can be denied that there are a lot of existing drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban landscape
  • aesthetic appeal
  • self-expression
  • innovation
  • construction methods
  • locally sourced materials
  • mismatched styles
  • visual appeal
  • cityscape
  • structural safety
  • property values
  • aesthetically uniform developments
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