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Do you think the government is right to stop people using mobile phones while driving?

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Nowadays, a lot of people benefit from their
smartphones
 for daily activities. Using
smartphones
 can gain lots of advantages, despite some drawbacks that can arise from using excessive mobile
phones
.
For instance
, when individuals start driving
,
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 but still play on their
phones
.
This
 can be dangerous for them and others. The government should make a policy to stop people from using mobile
phones
 while they are driving.
First
 of all, using mobile
phones
 while driving is common but it is widely considered dangerous due to its potential to cause distracted driving and crash. We can see, a lot of accidents happened and it caused
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drivers
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 use of
smartphones
 while driving.
As a result
,
this
 can be a threat to every person on the street.
However
,
this
 is a problem that government needs to address. Give the
drivers
 a sanction while they are driving and using
smartphones
. So people can stay carefully on the street.
On the other hand
, using mobile
phones
 has economic impacts as seen in those
drivers
 can have economic costs
such
 as paying for the costs of the collision, and losing pay if late to work from distracted driving. More interesting,
however
, is how a driver's mobile phone use while driving can have external effects on both other
drivers
' safety and other
drivers
' economic property.
In other words
, the negative consumption produced by mobile phone use while driving not only affects others on the road but
also
 causes economic inefficiencies. In summary, it is certainly right if the government has the solutions to stem the tide of mobile
phones
 and driving. The restriction of not only handheld
phones
 but
also
 hands-free ones will make a great benefit for many aspects of traffic security.
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