Most of successful invention do not rely on complicated technology. In fact, some of the word’s greatest inventions have been very simple things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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No, I don’t believe in ghosts.

That is

because I have never seen

one

Also

, I am a Catholic, I do not believe in superstition. No, I would not be scared. I am only afraid of confined spaces. I am scared of being in tiny spaces.

That is

my only fear. So, if the haunted house is big, I will be fine in it. Yes, I like to visit those places. If I have free time, I would go there to see them. I want to experience the past life for once in my life. I think

this

is a

two blade

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two-blade

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knife.

First

, if growing up in the countryside,

one

does not get to experience modern life.

However

one

can have a peaceful and healthy lifestyle.

Second

Correct word choice

apply

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growing up in the city,

one

is introduced to the newest technology.

However

, they are

also

easily distracted by those devices and forget about their studies. So they can not grow up well.

Thus

, both the countryside and

city

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the city

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have their benefits and disadvantages.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

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173 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Most of successful invention do not rely on complicated technology. In fact, some of the word’s greatest inventions have been very simple things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

In today's world many people own a smartphone do you thinh advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children's families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.