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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as a human, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including use for foods and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #animals #rights #humans #foods #research
Animals
 are
the
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a
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 basic need and
essential
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an essential
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 part of society. Most individuals argue that
animals
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animals'
animal's
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right
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rights
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 are the same as
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humans'
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humans
 as well as they are not exploited by folks.
On the other hand
, a group of people say that
animals
 are only used for food and research and to fulfil other needs of mankind. In my opinion, I strongly agree that
animals
 and
humans
 should have the same rights.
First
 and foremost, I would like to say that every living creature in
this
 world should be treated in the same way. Rules and regulations are not only for mankind but
also
 for other creatures that play a significant role in making our society and culture. All the living organisms in
this
 universe have some requirements.
For example
, in some nations dogs and cats are assumed to be waste and even most people kill them and run away from their vicinity.
However
, in spite of
that
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 they are faithful, as well as they are
also
 used in several medicines that are mainly used to save
humans
 life. On the flip side, most folks thought that
animals
 and other living brutes accept
humans
 have no rights. They all should be treated in the same way. They can only be used to fulfil the requirements of people as well as in research. They cannot think that the thing
that is
 used for their basic needs, has some rights.
For instance
, several
animals
 are used for food and other needs. It's our obligation to save them and to protect them from every danger. At
last
, I evaluate that
although
,
animals
 are not like
humans
 and they have no sense, despite
that
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they must be treated in the same way as
humans
. The government should take it seriously and it's the obligation of authorities to define some rules and regulations for
animals
also
.
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