Some people believe that in order to reduce crime, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.

It is a controversial topic to be discussed, some people argue that we should punish criminals with long prison sentences and it will lead to

diminish

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the

crime

rate

. While I agree that law-breakers should face the result of their atrocities, I do not support

this

idea, I do believe that there are many active alternatives to accomplish

this

. On one hand, those who argue that

long

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period of prison would be a shield to protect the community and make individuals think about the consequences of any action. They did not consider that the law already

punishing

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killers and

rapist

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rapists

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with long and harsh punishments, but the

rate

still

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the same.

For example

in some Latin American countries, famous drug dealers have been executed;

such

as Pablo Escobar,

nevertheless

, the

crime

rate

is still the same especially when we talk about drugs.

On the other hand

, there are many alternatives to implement, rather than old ways, one of them is raising folk awareness, encouraging ethical beliefs, increasing the sense of justice among people,

fighting

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unemplyment

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unemployment

,

although

it would be hard to achieve all these at one time, but making

this

like a constitution will make a difference and certainly it would be reflected in the

crime

rate

. For

instanse

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instance

, in developed countries where these ideas are considerably

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and taking place in the mindset, the

rate

of

cime

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time

crime

there is less than

other

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in other

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countries. To sum up,

However

, terrible fate like a long prison period would be successful sometimes, in the long term we need more active alternatives to fight the

crime

from the roots