You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. In your letter • Explain what you would like to do. • Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years • Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Pete, How are you? I hope you're fine. I am writing to let you know that I planned to pursue a culinary course, apart from my business management degree. I've learned that universities in Canada, specifically in Alberta offer excellent culinary courses. And my Aunt who lives there is willing to let me stay with her during the duration of my study. After working for a couple of years for a private firm, I am now managing our cafe. With my previous work experience, I can quite say I am handling it well. But of course, I want to be more engaged with

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kitchen operations which is why I want to learn culinary arts. Could you offer me some advice on which universities suit me at a moderate cost? It would be a great help if you could send me the contacts of those universities so that I could phone them myself. Hope to hear from you soon. Warm regards, Anna

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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