The bar charts below shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second year of use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
The illustration shows a community
website
is
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being
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being visited
visits
by ample
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an ample
of
people. Here, it is shown Change preposition
apply
that
how many people are Correct word choice
apply
visits
the first
and second
year
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years
to
the community Change preposition
of
website
. The information
given here is the main features where we can see number
of Add an article
the number
a number
visits
, number
of people, and Correct article usage
the number
also
usage
of Correct article usage
the usage
first
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the first
year
and second
year
. In addition
, the information
contradicts with
each other very fairly.
The charts Change preposition
apply
shows
some comparison where we can see, in the Change the verb form
show
month
of January, the number
of first
year
of use the website
is very minimum than the
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in the
second
year
. This
is how every month
's illustration is being showed
here. By selecting and reporting the main features, relevant Change the verb form
is being shown
is showing
comparison
can Fix the agreement mistake
comparisons
be identify
easily. Here, we can see the Change the verb form
be identified
month
of February's information
where the number
of first
year
of use
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using
website
is very low, whereas
the second
year
of use is very high than the previous one. We can see almost 9000
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a 9000
gap
from Change to a plural noun
gaps
first
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the first
year
to second
.
On top of that, if we look at the Correct article usage
the second
month
of August, we can see a clear picture of the difference between two
years. Here, we can see Correct article usage
the two
first
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the first
year
the number
of visits
to a community website
is higher than the
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in the
second
year
. However
, the range of the number
is not that much noticeable. Only about 1000
/2000 gap is being seen from Correct article usage
a 1000
first
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the first
year
to second
one.
In conclusion, we can say that the gap is almost Correct article usage
the second
same
from Correct article usage
the same
first
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the first
year
to second
, and Correct article usage
the second
second
year
to first
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the first
year
. This
is the relevant comparison between two years, and summarization
of the Correct article usage
a summarization
information
given here.Submitted by mfh.faisalhasan on
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