A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
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finds you well . I am writing
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letter with regard to your need for a voluntary person in your museum.
First
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of all , I would like to inform you of some reasons for I like
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job .
Firstly
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, I found it a great chance to do a meaningful activity for society.
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, I have free time at the weekend and I am looking for a great way to fill it so I think it is enjoyable and useful .
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,I have a passion for history
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it would improve my historical knowledge.
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, I am a sociable person who can speak three languages English , French and Persian so I think I would be a good receptionist and
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I think it would be worth mentioning I am a Data-Scientistic so I can make a survey of visitors and it would help you to improve demand. With respect I am working as a full-time employee during the week
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I am just available at the weekend for the whole time . If you have questions please do not hesitate to write back to me . Yours faithfully, Neda Ghasemi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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