Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Children
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who go to
school
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every day not only face up with stress from studying but
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many of them deal with bullying which has
negative
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a negative
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impact on both
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the physical
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body,
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and mind
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. In
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essay, I would like to show my
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about its causes and
solutions
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for it. Bullying has many various causes
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as violent game ->
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, their family, loss
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manegemant
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management
-> management of
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school
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the school
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. Nowadays, numerous
pupils
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play
games
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in
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early age, and it has
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a negative
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impact on their character. The pupil
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life is the same as
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and damaging others does not cause serious consequences.
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, family violence and conflict between parents
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make their
children
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's mind
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problems
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.
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, bullying reflects their family and life condition.
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, the management of the
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is
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one of the causes
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these
problems
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. Because many teachers
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not concern about
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the feeling
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feeling
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feelings
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of
pupils
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and
difficulties
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the difficulties
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which
pupils
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face up with in studying and changing psychology.
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, many schools know about
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problems
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but they do have efficient
solutions
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to solve it and it becomes more serious over time. In my opinion, there are some
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which
i
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think can reduce
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negative problem.
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, parents should manage
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children'
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children games
games
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and make sure that
this
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game may not have negative impacts.
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,
school
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and family should have more contact when
children
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have abnormal actions and have
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as soon as they can.
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, one room for psychology may be necessary to make sure that
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school's
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the school's
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solutions
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may
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efficiency
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and
do
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apply
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not make
situation
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the situation
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become worse.
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,
pupils
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should be studied lessons about good characters
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as friendly, kind,
honest
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and honest
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. In conclusion, bullying is not easy to delete at
school
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. But we must have
solutions
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to reduce
problems
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and make sure that the effect of bullying does not permanent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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