Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Children
who go to school
every day not only face up with stress from studying but also
many of them deal with bullying which has negative
impact on both Add an article
a negative
physical
body, Correct article usage
the physical
mind
. In Correct word choice
and mind
this
essay, I would like to show my thinking
about its causes and Replace the word
thoughts
solutions
for it.
Bullying has many various causes such
as violent game -> games
, their family, loss in
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of
manegemant
-> management of Correct your spelling
management
school
. Nowadays, numerous Add an article
the school
pupils
play games
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at in
in
early age, and it has Correct your spelling
an
negative
impact on their character. The pupil Add an article
a negative
think
life is the same as Change the verb form
thinks
games
and damaging others does not cause serious consequences. Second
, family violence and conflict between parents also
make their children
's mind has
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apply
problems
. Therefore
, bullying reflects their family and life condition. However
, the management of the school
is also
one of the causes for
these Change preposition
of
problems
. Because many teachers does
not concern about Change the verb form
do
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the feeling
a feeling
feeling
of Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
pupils
and difficulties
which Correct article usage
the difficulties
pupils
face up with in studying and changing psychology. Moreover
, many schools know about this
problems
but they do have efficient Fix the agreement mistake
problem
solutions
to solve it and it becomes more serious over time.
In my opinion, there are some solutions
which i
think can reduce Change the capitalization
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this
negative problem. First
, parents should manage children'
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children games
games
and make sure that this
game may not have negative impacts. Second
, school
and family should have more contact when children
have abnormal actions and have solutions
as soon as they can. Third
, one room for psychology may be necessary to make sure that school's
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the school's
solutions
may Add a missing verb
be efficiency
efficiency
and Replace the word
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do
not make Unnecessary verb
apply
situation
become worse. Add an article
the situation
Finally
, pupils
should be studied lessons about good characters such
as friendly, kind, honest
.
In conclusion, bullying is not easy to delete at Correct word choice
and honest
school
. But we must have solutions
to reduce problems
and make sure that the effect of bullying does not permanent.Submitted by workwithmanh1989 on
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